This cartoon was created to see if I could improve my artistic style compared to my last creations. I beleive it does. Anyways I hope you enjoy this.
Slapstick comedy hardly works here
The visuals were barely above par, the comedy was near to aweful and the sounds lacked at time.
Something I can give you points for is the fluency of your animation. While the visuals lacked, the animation was still smooth, in a nice way.
Good work on that half.
Barely above par? Why don't you look at the crap people are submiting to this site and compare it to this. There was no need for comedy it's just supposed to be "Random". Visuals did not lack my friend either way your review score is way too low. From what you stated it sounds like you gave it a 6. A three is more like animation crap,visuals crap,etc.
it was so-so
It was fine, but it was way to short. I was hoping it would have more randomness.
I only felt I could have done more but I was just too busy making the graphics of this cartoon.
Uh...What?
Okay, better than my animation anyways. The music at the beginning did not match the mood of the flash, though- pick more carefully.
The music had no point whatsoever to do with the animation..... I still think this deserved a higher rating because the graphics were amazing!