Timing is off
the timing of your flash is off a bit, you should fix that, but the movie's kinda nice nevertheless
I thought the idea was okay, but dude you need to sync up the voices witht he mouth soooo badly. That and a couple of the charactors needed to do better, they were doing that little kid shit that they start talking really quiet and then do some crappy yells and shit. I suggest do a whole voice and lip sync do over. But I did like your animation and drawings, pretty good/simple
but the mouthes was off
Some syncing issues
It was pretty funny, but every single audio line is off sync with the animation. Fix that and resubmit it.
Pretty good, keep working on it.
One thing that got to me was how slow it was. Work on getting a faster pace going, and work on your lip-syncing, some times it was like a Japanese film where the people kept talking after the line was done. You could use some work on the voices too, but they were good enough. Good job man, looking foward to ep 2