Pretty amazing for a flash and it was intense, maybe a little too much slowmotion and there was some choppy animation
Great flash, everything was decent, but...
Well like I said, it was an amazing flash, but you need to work out some screenplay and choreography. There were just far too many slow motion sequences, the whole flash seems dragged out at half speed and the camera was a little out of place in a few parts. However, those how blaring errors aside, a great flash. Good work.
Very nice. It was very original and so real, good work. I hope you continue to make some more like this one.
Some of your effects could do with some improving, like the shattering glass and the ricochet effects, but I liked the explosion towards the end.
You could also do with making your character animations a bit more fluid and life like, they'er a bit stiff and toy-like right now.
I enjoyed watching it though, keep up your good work.
I simply loved the use of F.E.A.R. sounds. Just loved the animation, man. Good job.