Great Story!

Although the flash could use a little animation and some sounds,the story and graphics make up for it.It's supposed to be a childrens' book.But the story was great like I meant to say earlier.It's great work,but it's missing an element or two.

Good character, bad animation.

Fairly well drawn, but as you said, it's a Children's book. You should have added a few animated elements to it though. Not bad though.

Nice try

Well drawn, but rather boring story. There's also no sound.

1/5

hey its ok if your an emo

but plz animate. it was touching and all but the low score is for lack of animation. kthnx

Nice

Nice to see stuff like this.