In a realm of mass bloodshed and war. A lone warrior battles through life.
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'Kay this is a side-project that I've been workin' on. I'm thinkin' about turnin' this into a series maybe too. Anyway listen up, the whole "good warrior" thing in this is just a joke/spoof on the ol'school japanese movies. This was also just a short test to see how things would work out. Thanks to all the helpful reviews their's alot of things I'm gonna change to make the series (if it happens) better but, I got other projects too. So the possible series is a long ways away.
This was pretty cool, smooth and varied FBF animation, plenty of action (even subtitles for the sounds... that's new!) and carnage in best Livecorpse style. Wonder if you've been inspired by him or vice versa? It ended a bit quick... but up until that disappointing moment when the screen turned black.. it was great. Keep it up!
-cd-
cool one
that was a neat animation. this one here had a cool, original concept behind it, nice characters and it was fun to watch. i found it to be a little bit short overall, but it was still quite nice to watch and your efforts in this one were good.
Hey thanks for noticing. Ya I should've spent more time on this one even if it was a test in a sense. When I get to work on this I'll make sure it's much, much, longer.
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hmmm... nice but sounds needs lots of work take a litte more time next time any thing to do with woe i take interest in so make it good
No worries. I won't dissapoint you.
I liked it
You certanly have skills as an animator, and that did show off your skills. Dont care about al that Clishe nonsence its just a flash mivie, not a hollywood, and still most of those are less entertaining than this. I think your graphigs need a biy of work, thin down the outlines, or at leist if you want tu use thick black ones, keep the same thickness over all your drawings. I loves your main character, the beard was a good addition and the mullet was SHOCKING! perfect!
keep animating with some improvement you could be realy, realy good.
- Rach
Thanks man, I'll keep the stuff you said in mind.
This is my constructive criticism
I can see what you tried to do here but i strongly recommend u dont. The whole idea is very cliche and used way too often in movies (both box-office and flash). If you do however want to do this sort of action flash here are a couple of tips:
-Dont try to save time by avoiding frame by frame animation. (I know this because i am a repeat offender). It just makes the animation look dodgy.
- Make the voices a lot louder than the music .
- For fight scenes (or scenes with any sort of heavy animation) spend a long time on each frame (im talking like 5 minutes minimum. 20minutes for really good ones)
- Use both shadows and highlights in ur shading (makes the characters seem more 3D)
-Do something fancy with some of the violence like slo-mo, multiple shots etc
- Do something unique with graphics such as black-and-white or high-contrast colouring.
Anyway i hope that helped :P
Other than all that i think u have potential in that u obviously know how to use flash.
3/5
Thanks this is a great review. Alot of helpful advice which I will for sure use. I will add shading, spend more time, make voices louder, and etc.
And don't worry. The whole "good warrior" uber-fighter thing was just a joke in this. To give a quick example of the story is the guy saw his father killed as a child whiched screwed up his head 'causeing him to later kill his own family and betray his country in the future. He's more of a villian then a hero.
Agian thanks. This is possibly the most helpful/best review I've gotten so far on NG.
