Well its a solid game

Well your graphics weren't too good, thats why you got 6 there...
I liked the style of the game, but it could still sharpen up a little bit, maybe put more choices, and add speed to it
sound, well the voice acting was well done, but you need to add music, it is a night club
violence. there is no violence,
interactivity could score higher, if you add more choices
humor 7, some conversations were funny...

its a cool game,
i do have a question though, why did you submit the same game twice?

Number 1 Rule

First of all, congratulations on you drawing my first review in over 2 years. You can feel honored that the legendary Promontorium has stopped by. 2ly the Number 1 Rule to getting girls in the club: Shut up and dance! People don't go to clubs to talk, that's what work is for, duh! And I have had much success with this practice, and I'm not hocking some website either.

Never before seen in NG!

Hey man not bad! Good idea I agree with what you say! The only bad things are :
1. Having to wait after the text that introduces Jim.
2. No music. While I understand that the conversations are important, you should put some music. It would feel more natural and less bland. Of course, it wouldn't be too loud.
3. You should had an option that let's you read all the advices you get after talking to the three girls.

Anyway very good idea. You really see concretes examples, plus you get to observe the advices in action. This is better than a book or any other dates sim.

You better make a sequel out of this!!!

not bad

this game was pretty good actually...i liked it

Gettin there, but keep working

Graphics-the drawing isn't too bad, but the animation lacks quite a bit. It isn't animated so much as it seems more like an automatically changing comic book panel.

Style-I've seen these games before and this one is pretty similar.

Sound-The voice overs are clear, but I would recommend some sort of music. Maybe a tecno beat or some rock beat.

Interactivity-Click on the button for pre-generated response. Same old story.

Humor-Yes and no. This topic is quite objective.

The most annoying thing about this is that I couldn't find a restart button after I finished with one girl and wanted to move on to the next one. I didn't even bother restarting the game. Additionally, I would restart back at the "girl choice" page rather than the introduction. I have already read that, and I don't really want to sit through it again.