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hahaha, so the ending is dissapointing I know, but if I redo the ending, then i'll end up redoing the whole thing which I'll do later so uhm... just wait I guess. Suggestions towards remaking it are definitley welcome so, please contribute! ^_^


- Zack Dimmer.

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Nice!

It was pretty much okay, except it needs sound and more content.

Keep it up!

Good first try.

I pretty much just see this as practice. It'll probably get blammed, since most people who review see NG as a place to put finished works. Aside from that, not bad.
As the person before me said, the animation was smooth, I particularly like the spot right after he kicks the guy's head off - the landing is semi realistic. Other than that - Just keep working on it, something a little longer with some sound will def get you better feedback.

You are getting there!

I have to say that you did a pretty good job making the entry, you are on the way of becoming a good flash artist. However, like you mentioned, the ending was not too good, work on it. Also, sound will also help you getting a good score. This flash is pretty good, but I still believe that you can do better. :D

smooth

fantstic animation, smooth and the body is not wildly change like in many other brush stick animations. some backround features and sound would of helped but i am still giving this a five it was funny how it got stuck in the roof.. haha

keep up the good work

zbassartz responds:

dude... appreciated!

Nice!

I'd like to see more of your work in the future :D
Sounds help, but never put crappy ones. Ever. Same goes for music. I really wasn't expecting much, but I got a "pwned" in my face because it was only 160kb lol. I hope people don't blind-blam this.

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2.14 / 5.00

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Jul 8, 2007
12:51 AM EDT