The Last Stand...
Whats with the nazi, i was hoping for something a little more like the 40k universe. Resonable drawing, but ive seen much better, and the british speech behind just subtracted from the overall. I wanted to hear something related to 40K. If your going to use a speech from earth, then set the location of the battle on earth, not some random planet. For 'HeadTaker', those are not british tanks, but the tanks of the Impreial Guard empire, the anvil of mankind in the 40th millenia. THough you have a good imagination, i'd still prefer everything to be more connected.