Not bad at all
I thought it was really drawn well. The only thing I would change is the audio. The voices were a little quiet and hard to hear. Other than that, good job. My daughter thought it was funny.
A decent submission
I rather enjoyed this piece. It wasn't horrible (I'll admit, I didn't finish it, but only because I'm painfully familiar with the story), but it wasn't groundbreaking. It's a nice little film. Well done, you have great artistic abilities.
don't listen to that last dipshit,
I thought it was excellent. It was simple, but appropriately so, so good job!
This movie sucked, we are not your school.
Script rewrite? DO GET ONE!
The public on NG isn't the same as little children. Re-write your script for something... something that might... uhhh... mm... uhh... ...be good? Redo it, and if you are worthy, you shall be granted PROTECTION!