an ok flash
You have good style however, you ended it way to quickly.
Try for a flash with a longer stroy and im sure you wills succeed.
you make the eyes of the girl really too big thats annoying lol
It could be better.
In the beginning, the trees looked weird...sort of...detached, actually. Probably because that was some horrible-looking grass. You made the girl's eyes look like an owl; they were WAY too big. It started to lag near the middle, so look into that.
Very nice, though. 10 on humor, 'cause I'm just that sick.
Wasn't her mouth covered? I know it was yet she still managed to scream...Kinda Defeats the purpose. Not to mention it was way to short and not very plot oriented so my score for you is kinda loe. Sorry.
But really good.
(I don't like "the end"><)
Make a sequel or something like that.