(alot of grammatical errors though)
That was very good
Have you supposedly used super Mario bros z as an inspiration in this or is it just a wild quinkuidink. anyways brilliant flash movie
yep i am SUPER inspired my SMBZ
I remember that you're a big fan of the Super Mario Ball Z episodes and that your making these as a kind of tribute... i feel that people might think your simply copying this idea, i dont think so but i think people might give you a zero for that kind of thing. i suggest you put an edit on the title bar that shows your intentions were not to copy but to make your own.
anyways, very well done, much improved since your first episode, which i thought was a little slow during the fight scenes but otherwise good. hmm suggestions.... music was good... graphics were good, ah yes... you had a lot of spelling/grammatical errors in dialog. My no. 1 suggestion would be to get more people to 'proof read' your flash before you submit your next one. Looking forward to it ;)
i do have someone to read it but he was not online at this hour but i can update it later