Lots going on here
And here we have a cleverly imagined entry, and im sure there will be lots of Criticisms but aside from all that I have to say That I Absolutely Like the idea of this and as I review this its just the start of things. but now lets really get into this. The voices need lots of work on this one and I would say the "MIC" could be of a better choice as there was some static there, other then that story and animation was not bad. And now the end is near in my review, while i had a fun time reviewing this I still had some confusion here but thats ok I Will watch it a few more times, but for the mostpart this was notbad interesting on some parts and could be somewhat better in others, So in my Closing Remarks Overall you have produced a good submission here, Keep up the interesting flash-works.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So I will start off this part with a few ideas and suggestions that could make it much better and overall bringing more viewers too seeing your content. just takes that little extra effort to bring across all fronts. Voices need more quality to them and you need a better quality mic.