you need some flash help....

dude tht was way too short and the end was messed up becuz at one point i saw these scribbly lines. u should also learn to make a replay button so it doesnt loop. other than tht keep up the good work :)

Haha.... cute.

So this reminds me of the old 'Lock' flashes, with the round unanimated characters. The talker thing just isn't appealing, and the Mac voices are only appropriate in Slapstick characters.

The background speaks for itself: Lacking in effort, and the material wasn't that great either. I thought it was kinda entertaining for the 20 seconds it ran, but it lost all value for me when nothing funny happened after 4 (more than 4) seconds. No hook to really bring it all together.

It appears you have a decent understanding of flash. Keep at it.

ehhh... Cheesecake?

Well, I liked it, but make it longer. And add a cheesecake guy in the next one. Cheesecake makes everything better.