Chronicles of a Demon Ep2

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The second episode of my series "Chronicles of a Demon"!

After Darkar pulled out the Hell's blade known as "Inferno", he was granted with a great power, a dangerous mission and a new packet of sugar marshmallow sunshines. Now with the sword and new demonic abilities, Darkar must fight 7 Angel Gods in order to get back the Hell's Stone and keep the balance as always. Of course, after eating something.

This one took me about three weeks and is about 7 minutes long (two more minutes compared to the first one), using 20 frames per second. I got excellent voice actors for this episode such as Sean "Sonicmega" Chiplock, Deven Mack, General Ivan, P3RFECT and of course my best friend Fernando Jasso. I want to give special thanks to Sonicmega because of showing much interest and enthusiasm in this project (really inspiring).

I got a little bit lazy with the script for this episode. I was thinking in creating a 4 minutes episode but thanks to Markus Moisio, a very good writer who is now thinking on a lot of ideas for future episodes, I managed to create a 7 minutes long episode! Actually I keep thinking if it was a good idea. I could have done two different episodes. What the Hell... It's great!

Anyways... Hope you like it guys!


haha demon sword master

i hate part one two three and stuff like that
when i like something i wanna watch it all :(

Darkar responds:

Ha ha I know but you would have to wait a lot to watch something complete. Thank you! :)

Once again, you made a nice intro.

I also agree that this could have been a little longer, but the story line seemed more in place this time around. Although, every episode needs its little cliff-hanger part, no matter if it's to a fight or to what's gonna happen next! You have improved from your first one, but that's to be expected. Afterall, skill comes with practice, right? Hope the next one comes out soon!

Darkar responds:

Thank you very much! :)


Woho! Really nice :O Make it longer and thats worth a five! (or I think so :P)

Keep it up I really need to see more of this :)

Darkar responds:

Thank you! :)

definitely one of my favorites.....

i have just one word for it...
i can't wait for the next epsiode...
*shaking from excitement*

Darkar responds:

Thank you! :)

All around great!

First of all i wanted to say how great it is that you're taking the time to read and respond to every review that is written.

Concerning Graphics - You did a good job, flows nicely and all, but as many other reviewers mentioned it could be improved on. Although that might be the case, the graphics in this movie are still good enough to let the viewer enjoy the flash and don't bring it down a bit. In the episodes to come you can keep improving and can use your new skills to make each episode better than the last, as shown in episode two compared to episode one. Good job.

Style - I like where this is going. I enjoyed episodes one and two, and I'm excited about the rest of the episodes in this series. The storyline is great and promises either a LOT more episodes or a few really long ones, depending on the route you want to take. Keep up the good work.

Sound - The voices are great; I don't see why people are complaining. The voice actors put emphasis into their roles and do a great job executing them, good job. ALSO - I cannot believe how little of the reviewers said anything about the music you used. The song in the intro and credits, that (according to the credits) you made is amazing, and for some reason is perfect for the way you made the intro. I love the song, don't ever change it.

Violence - Although this episode might not have had that much violence, the next episodes (I hope) will, seeing as how he has to fight these angel gods. You wrote earlier that you aren't too great at animating fight scenes, but with practice you'll become great and it'll look great. Looking forward to it.

Interactivity - Pressing play, 'nuff said. Twice even. (But it doesn't need interactivity so nothing to worry about here)

Humor - I think it's great that you're trying to make humor in English even though you're a native Spanish speaker, and for the situation you are in, you're doing great. It's much better than a lot of other attempts by people submitting flashes, but it could be improved on. Even the non-verbal jokes are good, like Darkar throwing the sword at Evil and the reactions afterwards, just to give an example. Who knows, maybe you can get the other people that are helping you with your movies to contribute and help make some more jokes. Doing good though.

Overall - 10/10, 5/5, loved it, good job, keep up the good work and keep improving!

Darkar responds:

Thanks a lot for this cheerful review! :)

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Credits & Info

4.23 / 5.00

Jun 19, 2007
2:11 PM EDT
Comedy - Original
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