Solid
It was pretty entertaining, but the background song was really quiet and it made it less exciting to watch, but the animation was good.
Author Comments
This is my second clay animation. Please message me to tell me if i improved or what i should improve on. i hope you enjoy this bloody battle. Should i make another one?
Good job!
It was funny and very well done. Add some faces maybe to the characters, maybe showing the pain as they're being sliced by the sword! Oh, and better music! But other than that! Awesome
Twistedhawke responds:
alright so you guys liked it but when u say improve the sound do u mean the song i put in there or like the action sounds. make them louder,lighter, what do u want?ill be happy to fix them.
You are on the good way!
Nice clip
make face, a good rock music and voice and u got a 10/10
Excellent!
I like how at the begining it shows that clay piece fall and squish and then turn into a ball and fly up. Nice sound for that. I didn't like how the sounds weren't that great for parts. When they walked, it didn't sound right. Maybe try getting a beter sound for the step. The rest was excellent, though!
good, good.
good work keep it up,really good for your second clay animation,I like the gore in it.
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3.71 / 5.00
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