It was alright.
The animation moved to slowly. I got bored pretty quick, and the art style doesn't match to tone of your story, but it wasn't bad. It looks like a little bit more time needs to be put into it, and more layers need to be added to your scenery. I could deal with all the words if there was something cool to look at, but there really wasn't. Keep working though, it'll definently be cool when it's revamped.
PS: You got bonus points for being the only movie I reviewed today with a pre-loader. THe liitle things do count for a lot.