I had to make a project for school in 3 weeks, we had to make a flash site and we had to learn the programm in those 3 weeks. I think it's good for a first time, and so said my teacher. So this is the first thing I really made in flash without the stupid pranks and stuff, this is my first serious Flash.
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Nice job for a school project, hope to see some more stuff with a little more quality from you someday. :D
Cool start in flash!
It seems that you really worked hard in your first try, and putting many things in the movie DVD style was a good idea. So I hope the real movie appears soon!
ouch
ya um i didnt really get wat i was suppose to be doing
and the music suked
it probly could be good if it wasnt so confusing on wat to click, u want the viewer to not hav to figure stuff out and be confused or he will giv u a bad score
yeah I was under a lot of pressure to make this. And my flash couldn't use mp3 files for some kind of reason, and I hadn't figured out yet how to make the sound play in all the scenes and have the mute and play button in it.
didnt look very awesome
u put a rather bright red for an evil creature maybe like a more violet red dunno black works best cant fuck that up but ya it sux...didnt eveng et point was this an advertisement? hey u know wut i noticed tho...swords...wuts so great about them...their outdated...u cant rob a bank with a sword...its just queer...theres gonna be the 1 fag that gets some motivation out of robbing a bank with a sword and instead of actually doing it hes gonna make a flash out of it and get credit...like 3000 years from now are people gonna make stuff with random guns going around like in ur flash there was a random silhouette of a sword floating around but it looked cool...wut im wondering is why? why did it look cool? you cant do that with a gun...and u notice that these days if u made a modern flash with a sword like based on dates of today the guy with a sword is either supernatural or immortal u cant make a regular gangster look cool with a sword cuz u know it wont work cant do a driveby with a sword...neway thats my rant..
have you ever seen a movie or something that's made in a dark theme and a Gothic kinda look with guns in it? I suppose not xD fantasy movies are my favourite kind of movies... and I've never seen someone doing a driveby in Lord of the Rings, or I've never seen a knight with a gun... do you?
Wait.... What?
I felt so lost in it and it did not seem to make any sense to me. I mean this is great for a first time I just don't get it. I liked the menu popup after clicking on the grave but some might not find that and get stuck there. Keep up the good work thou, you have a lot of promise.