sweet love 4 mr x
Mr..X Ep. 2
June 10, 2007 –February 5, 2018
Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.
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So this is the second episode in the series of Mr.X and follows Mr.X through from Washington to amber falls (random name for a town in america). Basicly this whole episode was based on the plot of the whole story of Mr. X. When it gets to the text parts, Please read them because that is the story! Also please dont close it during the text parts cos theres more animation after it. P.S.-The music has gone really really really out of time as you can see when it says "You love the things I say Ill do" So I will try to fix that
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But like other people have said the explosion at the beginning could have been alot better! just keep tryin 2 get better
This was longer and better then your first one, I like how you expanded on the story and had more of a plot this time. But like other people have said the explosion at the beginning could have been alot better. Well keep on working on this because it seems to be getting better.
i didnt like the blow up scene @ the beginning. it wuz just a abunch of red stuff all over. also, i couldnt tell who wuz who, it wuz just like guys killing eachother. also, a few spelling mistakes were made, like wen it sed welcome to amber falls, welcome and to were joined together. i like the song and the idea. but i didnt no wut wuz going on @ the end. o yeah, and add sound FX
it looks pretty good, especially for someone who has only been using flash for 3 months! im impressed. keep it up and it will keep getting better... as or this one... to slow paced... but a good effort.
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- 2.10 / 5.00