Bringing up ur score
lolz cuz i liked it hahaha XD
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So here is another animation by a nooby, me!
I have no experienced beside watching tutorial online and figuring everything out
Yes..it's SSB but its not super smash brother...well it is but its Super Street Brother..a Super SMash brother with a twist
(Notice: I couldn't make it longer because something went wrong, everytime I put a graphi on a scene, it kept putting a graphic i didn't want- so yeah, thats why I cant make it longer. And do anyone know how to put music in the menu? cause eveytime i put it, it won't play)
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that was hella funny 10/10 cause its funny like i said that surrprised me with kirby plz keep kirby its funny with kirby lol make antother one
Looks okay
Looked like it was going to be interesting but then it end real quick and I couldn't figure out what was going on.
Err....
Well, i think you have to improve and make the dialogue more slowly and make it more longer. I wait for the second episode to see your improvement.
OK what are u smoking
The graphics and music were ok but the story line has nothing that wants me to carry on watching. AT ALL !!!!!!!!!!! i am NOT looking forward to the next episode at all ! Leave now and never return!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Teenplayer84 responds:
Okay....I tried to make it into a building story...you know? throughout the series...a story line will build up. Yeah so Sorry if I disapointed you