Nice, needs a few tweeks.

Not a bad submission, i enjoyed it. The graphics were above average, i even noticed shadows in some areas [you don't see that too much]. The story was cute and funny. Some things i notices was the animation was a little slow, perhaps experimenting with higher framer ates. It will make things like the energy beam from the monster and movements look smother. Also the fact that you have sound is good but it seems a but distant and muffled compared to other entries, it may just be a simple adjustment you need to make in your mic volume.

~Dna

I thought this was very imaginative

I know the parties involved and the effort that went into making this flash. For this being the first flash done by Renegade1, it was a very good (short) flash. I liked the "happy" music at the end. It was very uplifting and made me feel very cheery. I could watch many times over and never tire of it. Good work; and I can't wait to see what you do next.

cool one

this one was quite short, but it was nice to watch. the concept to this one was semi-original and offered some nice entertainment, cool graphics, the voices in this one were a little bit weird and low in volume but the type/style of voices in this one did suit this one quite well and your efforts were good. i do think that it could've been a little better if it was longer though.

That was funny.

That was one of the funniest things ever. I know how you feel.

Score Breakdown:

Graphics: I've seen better, but for this, it worked.
Style: Very well done.
Sound: The voices were a bit soft, but they were well done otherwise.
Violence: Implied violence, but no blood. This is not bad.
Interactivity: Play button. Nothing more. This is not bad.
Humor: So funny, yet so true.
Overall: You managed to convince me to watch it twice, which is a feat. Very well done.

ha

lol puts my first flash to shame (that was 2 days ago) it got blamed in like....2 or 3 hours lol

hopefully the one i am wourking on right now will do better