Random?
Wasn't very good too be honest and had no point too it.
hopefully your better now.
Author Comments
Originally this was written as a series, but I never really followed through on it. With all the time restrictions, poor response to this flash and other factors I didn't feel I could give the time or effort needed to improve my writing skills.
hypeserver responds:
Thankfully I've improved a lot over the years. The only reason I keep this up is to stay as a reminder of the work I did in the past. As a writer I have to laugh at the silliness and pointlessness of it. Once the first episode of my new series is completed then I'll be taking this flash down. It's up as a reminder of the past and so I have at least 'a' flash on my profile. As far as randomness goes, yes it was incredibly random. At the time it did seem a lot better than some of the things that were being submitted though.
This is great
Please make more flash. You have good music. Graphics were drawn well. I liked the style of your characters. I liked how you had that guy poke that girl's boobs and she got all angry and stuff. Very nicely done! You have some excellent skills!
Gave me a chuckle
worthy of passing if nothing else 2/5 4/10
Okeeej..
yes, I was a bit short, really really short. Didn't make me laugh at all. BUT, I liked the style though. Annnd.. thats about it, sound was ok 2 I guess.
All right then...
Okay, the flash wasn't horrible, but the graphics themselves weren't fantastic, and the sound wasn't outstanding either. Plus, i'm not sure how to make this story line into an actual series. Could've included more jokes as well. Sorry to be so against it, but I truthfully just don't see where it would fit in on newgrounds.