where do i begin?

how about the logic portion.

"hmmm what's this big glowing thing? looks dangerous....maybe ill pop inside a moment and see what it does." does that sound like a healthy minded person to you?

he is a ninja right? ninja are pajama wearing panys that fight from the shadows. in other words.....that was more samuriesque than ninja.

the graphics were poor

your grasp of the english language needs work

your use of the know it all NPC was so abused it wasn't even funny. the dialog was lacking as well

and metal music doesn't always have to be put into a fight scene. nor emo music if that is where your next one is going.

i hope you use this information to better yourself as an artist.

not bad infact

i think that was pretty good for a short flash
that special exposion effect was really good, looks like your worked on this for at least 1 week or so.

but with it just being most music, that lowered sound score, try getting a voice in there and a little more movement.

if you can get the faces to have more movement and that kind of stuff, it would be alot better!

Alright

Using blocks instead of sticks makes it a little more interesting. The effects animation (in that one explosion) is decent. The slow-moving dialogue that reveals what is going on really drags and kinda kills it, esepcially since the animation ends like two seconds later. I haven't watched all of your NinjaBlock submissions, but perhaps it would be better (if it's one continuous story), for them to all be put together.

8\10

Good job i liked it. It was the same kind idea behind many stick figure movies but the characters were boxes which added the element of uniqueness. The animation was simple but well executed, i feel like it could have been a bit faster. Another fault in my opinion was the length of the dialog and the type of text. The Dialog could have been a bit shorter and the text could have been in a more legible font. Besides that i really enjoyed it, the ending has me i cant wait to see more : )

~Dna

Unusual ...

Why exactly do block people talk about humans?