This really did have some good designs and the fights were very cool, I hope you have continued with this, so wait for the new episodes!!!

The drawing on this was pretty good and is improving for sure from your previous work. Am looking forward to future installments the overall story was good and each environment was nice too as well. Sound was near perfect.

This one....

was a little better graphically. It's almost like you're learning flash as you go and are getting better. Please continue this series. Putting you on my favorite authors list so I get an e-mail when you finish the next. Great work.

Could use some more touchup

`The good things`
I liked the story, and the faces were pretty nicely drawn. And the background had a nice depth. And the voices? Yeah the voices were absolutely great!

`The bad things`
Bodies could use a bit touchup, you can recognize the objects, but not great enough. Graphics were descent, and could use some more details. I miss some sound effects, and this movie could probably use some more humor in it.