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ok, so this is a preview of what's to come. The bod and bg and everyting isobviously not finished yet, so don't complain about those. I don't expect this to make it, but I just need some feedback and hints to make it better.
Well it was kinda boring there was no fighting in it but I like the music.
HES 15 GIVE HIM A BREAK...GOD.....7/10
P.S. IM Oreo Killa 225
What the hell is this? Why would you release an unfinished picture of a person and some stupid conversation with yourself? It sounds like you didn't even try to change your voice very much for the "father". Seriously, it would have taken 5 minutes to finish the body of the son. Waste of time.
My advice: Better voices, and actually DRAW the person next time.
Sorry about the voice. that's aslow as i an go without hurting my throat.
were you trying to suck
I hope you weren't actually trying to make a serious flash here cuz if you were u got the 1 you deserve. if not lemme know and ill change it from a 1 to 5.
Belongs in the alphas...
Tom warns you not to submit incomplete work.
My constructive advice is to submit it to the alphas and not here until it is complete.
We get piles of this stuff all the time with all the promises to complete-; we waste our time and it never is complete.
ok irst, wher's the alphas, and second, this will be fnishd. Although i thoroughly didn't expect it to make it. Wierd eh? So instead of resubmitting a better one i'll just add on to it.
Fernando accepts a difficult mission from a suspicious guy who buys him some yoghurt.
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