Nice Job
I like the style but wish a little more effort had been put into the graphics at points. Keep it up.
Author Comments
Pure FBF Besides the credits. this is my 1st flash i actually tried... its 1402 including the credits. so i hope you enjoy i may work on another 1. it matters if people like it.
Great 1st
It's great to see when someone puts a lot of effort into their first Flash.
Nicely done. It was smoothly animated and exciting to watch. Keep making Flash is my opinion.
hmm
pretty trippy, seeing this while blazed was pretty cool...and i have no idea why i laughed (yeah i do...im high =) U HAVE MY PROTECTION
It had a vibe to it
It's somewhat hypnotic after a while. Nice work on the randomness of the objects.
has potential
it had a great flow to it. great for a first movie.
I have a few suggestions though:
-add more color. most of it was black, and black is boring
-more stuff at the same time. Like 2 or 3 lines
- more than just a line going through other lines. you had a few pictures and stuff, but a little more is needed.
hope this doesn't get blammed,
apollo
