I actually enjoyed that.. other than the fact that I had to keep my hand on the volume knob of my speakers.
Every movie in the series so far had fluxuating volume levels... As in, some voices were soft, others were unbelievably loud, which made me turn down my speakers, then turn them back up. Next time, don't be too close to the mic when you're doing voiceovers.. Back up a bit, or install a spit guard.
Overall 8, because it was funny, but slightly troublesome to watch.
Thank you for your candor. To be honest, the voice-over is the most difficult part for us (I say "us," since my partner does all the actual animation. This is the frustration we share).
A lot of times, these things are recorded at different times, in different locales. So it's difficult to maintain a constant flow.
That's no excuse, really. But we like to think that the amateur nature of the art lends a sense of savoir faire to the whole...affair (if you'll allow the pun). We're glad you were able to garner some entertainment, though. Keep watching!