hmmm
well, the mood was a little off-set by the cartoony characters. and you need to get a better mic, put it closer to your mouth, or just talk louder. cant hear ye!
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part 1 of the cold war series, the solider was one of the best snipers in the us army durring the russian cold war, the general fears for his position in the army with the new competor, so he sends him on a "secret mission" that ends in his betrayal
**the voice stuff in the last scene is really hard to understand, sorry, he says
"i had been captured, take prisoner. i didnt know were i was, or what they would do to me, i expected the worst. then is when i saw, my general, he had betrayed me"
"for three long months i sat in that cell, slowly dieing, only thinking of one thing, revenge on the general who had betrayed me"**
***this is the first time iv really used audasity and the audio is poor quality, i realise that, give me a break***
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nice mood
but the style didn't really fit the mood. The narration is sometimes hard to hear as well.
But other than than, i like how you attempt what most dont bother with, emotion.
Cool
The music wasn't bad lol but i couldn't hear what he was sayin too good but i'll be waitin for the next part.
NinjaGorilla01 responds:
The next part will probably be coming out within the next 2 weeks, if all goes as planed, im sorry about the audio, especaly at the last part, it was terrable, but the next one is going to be SOO much better, i had three days to make this one, so thats the best i could do with the time restrants, but on the sequal im trying out some new techniques, some good music, and other ppl for audio parts, its gona be great
Rock and a hard place
The sound really hurt you on this one, but I find myself wandering what's going to happen next. Don't leave us hanging too long.
good stuff
much better than all that other pointless drivel you put out, like that obvious ripoff of the idiot test, and that galaga thing, this might actually become a succesful series, you need more voice acting( hint hint) but other than that its pretty good
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