haha
I thought that was brilliant. Keep up the good work!
Author Comments
This was originally for a collab but it was kicked out. I decided to submit it because I like it.
Leave a review and I'll respond.
Imacow responds:
Why thank you good sir
Funny
You have something with the cow. I think your lil cow could rival Hello Kitty in cute factor.
Imacow responds:
Hell yeah.
'Twas ok
The graphics were not too amazing, they worked though! They were not awesome or anything like that, so 6.
The style was nice, I guess some of the animation could be contributed to style. It worked.
I didn't like the sound. It wasn't good quality and there was a lot of fuzziness. Also, your trampoline sample wasn't that good, aim for a better one.
There was no violence, so 10.
The buttons worked, so high points on interactivity.
It was not funny, in my opinion, so 3 for humor.
I thought it was way to short and could use a bit more work. 6/10
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3D was good
I'd say you could do with studying the mechanics of how a trampoline works. I know it may be getting a little technical, but if you understood that better, then maybe the animation would look a little better. Put some springs around the edge - they stretch, not the fabric of the tarpaulin.
When the cow jumps, make more than just his knees bend, as if he's really putting some effort into getting into space. Arms, hips and knees should all be moving. These little touches would make it so much better.
Also, a better sound effect for the trampoline itself and maybe a slightly quieter music track.
Other than that, it'snot going to set the portal ablaze, but it'll certainly be a passable flash animation.
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Imacow responds:
Thanks for the review.
The trampoline animation wasn't as realistic as possible. I should of made for limbs moving.
I liked the sound effect =[
The music was a little loud.
Ok
It was ok, there wasn't really much that I liked but the "3D" cow flying in space impressed me a lot. The trampoline effect bouncing was pretty bad - a trampoline doesn't extend the amount of the material, it stretches lower, your flash made it look like the trampoline produces more of that material when someone goes to bounce.
You also need to put more effort into the jumping animation, it didn't look like he was doing much.
And your drawings need shadows, those really make a difference to drawings and improve graphics by a lot.
5.8/10
2.8/5
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Imacow responds:
Thanks, I was going for a cartoony effect.