It was a decent attempt

You need to work on your graphics my friend. Have more animation than simply tweens in it. It was a nice attempt though even though Im not a big fan of music videos

Alright.

That was actually pretty good, the animation on the ships was pretty bad, but otherwise you can tell that you worked hard on it, so good job, and keep animating.

HA!

Ok, now I've played the tabletop game and never have I ever thought of Warhammer 40K as a party place. I guess I was wrong!

Well, as a beginner it's obvious you have a lot to learn, but you also took your time on this which is OBVIOUS because 1) you used fbf quite a bit and 2) you ACTUALLY finished the song which I commend as most Flash noobs only do about 20 seconds and cut badly at the end.

First off, add the NG Preloader. Other than that, the graphics weren't too bad. Definitely you should spend more times drawing the non-moving things like the Monoliths, backgrounds, speeder, etc. Using smaller outlines on the characters and details in the Flash would be beneficial (The Monoliths had HUGE green lines, it looked terrible and the way you did the speeder fire was also... not good). But all that will come in time.

Bottom line is you made a VERY good first Flash and are creative. This idea is definitely original. I have no doubt it passed judgement.

Also, the idea with the monoliths being used as huge party lights was absolutely hilarious and creative.

4/5!

haha

love the beastie boys

eh

it's not that bad for a beginner dude, not at all. pretty good actually.

but...not good enough for the portal in my opinion...im sure your next one will be though, so keep trying and practicing!