Very VERY poor...

It has stick figures...try and distance yourself from that style. It needs A LOT of improvements, most notably is the graphics. Its very lacking in that department as well as the animation. Its also very VERY short. Practice a lot more before you submit something...

Oh my God

They're going to put Starscream in the Transformers movie?!?!? I scream you scream we all scream for star scream!