kinda sucked, not extremely bad.
Only positive thing I can say about this work is the choppers, they were nicely drawn. But everything else wasnt very good... sry.
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I have already started part 2 but it'll be awhile before its released.
Ok I already know about the eyes getting big at the beginning, and then at the end back to menu goes weird. I also know that in credits it says "Breakin Benjamin - Unknown soldier" that is wrong. It is Chizzly. I know of all the weird things so please don't tell me that thanks :).
this is my first series Diversion of Destruction and i'v been working on this for arount 6-8 months I would say. I restarted a bunch because I figured out new things that would make this better, smoother, etc. I hope you guys can enjoy this by giving me constructive critism (so not mean but helpfull commments). I know this will not be expert or anything but I would really appreciate helpfull comments.
Also I would like to know if I should make it longer in part 2 or shorter I want that opinion to. Thanks, and I hope you enjoy this submission.
blade55555 responds:
Eh I know its not that good and the chopper I didn't draw. I plan on doing alot better next time and hopefully I can draw my own chopper sometime. But thanks for the review.
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Man....u must have watch castle series for a hell lot of times!
The animation need doing!
Voice actors need to sound more realistic!
The eye does'nt have to be at the edge of the heads
Good try though!
blade55555 responds:
Ah I already know som eof the bad stuff about the movie. Thanks for your comment and I will try and improve on that in part 2. Idk I thought the General and Jim had nice voice acting. Thanks for the review.
Straight to the Point
Nice work Blade, wasn't aware all this time that's what you had been requesting voice acting for but by god it's wonderful. As i've already told ya earlier the final product is nice (don't give me crap bout how u can do better work than i can...we already now how that discussion going to end:P) but the violence is nice, theres one spot where there's no audio for one shot with the pistol which was surprising. there was a cool start but maybe a bit more background...like why he got it or how he got it...maybe some kick ass military delivery to get it to him on time ...you know only a few seconds worth but it still adds to the overall feel. my opinion on the fast paced action is yea it speeds up your whole video but then it means you would put more action and violence in rather than storyline but dude, i love it regardless of the usual criticism I just gave you lol. well keep it up, and man, let me know next time before you run off to your computer to do this...I want in on it!:D
blade55555 responds:
lol I didn't know you were righting something like this. But thanks for the long comment.
Cool start!
The graphics and action gets more than a 10! Go finish part 2, this is really exciting!
blade55555 responds:
Thank you. I must say i'm amazed at these comments i'v been receiving. Thanks to these commens I will make sure I make part 2, make it longer and improve everything. Thank you for the comment.
nice work
Blood could have used a little work, and when the guy punches the zombie off him that was a wee bit choppy.
But great work! Cant wait for number 2!
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blade55555 responds:
Thank you for the comment! I hope #2 will be a lot more impressive. I'v learned a ton from making this and know how to improve. Thank you for your comment :).
