Creative Criticism

Ok, it started well - so maybe if you actually put something after the intro you may come up with a decent product.

WTF is up with putting all that nothing up... a red dot surrounded by a random assortment of static... seriously.

Uh Oh... I Smell A Spam Fad.

If the second letter of the alphabet in Times New Roman on a white page could cause such a ruckus. Think of all the mass damage a lil red dot on a black screen could do.