Alright...

Graphics 5 : Your draw good but the pictures arent your best, try put a black backround on text so you can read what it says.
Style 8 : No comment
Sound 0 : Some disco music would be good
Violence 1 : No Comment
Interactivity 6 : Underestood all
Humor 10 : Your humor is REAL GOOD if u see the pictures u will laught alot for example the candiman it was awesome!
Avarage : 6
Total : 8
Blam/Protect : Protext (5/5)
Try those stuff you will get real good points!

Author's comments:

EDIT: I don't know why, but for reasons unknown it doesn't show the full answers for every question - can anyone explain to me why?
It seems to just cut the textboxes in half - anyone else with this problem?

My answer:
Try put the text on the picture on the clips on right side in flash.

Good Luck!

eh.... u do need a BIG improvement

graphic = nice
style = eh.... can't c words that is
sound = didn't hear, maybe it's better to not know ( sry if hurts)
violence = no red fonts or drawing
interactivity = 1 min n 42 sec i close da window, boring
humor = the alien =P
overall = next time, make the words more clear, sum just blended with the BG

since i kno ur new with flash ( eh... r u?) so i just gave u a 5, when i used flash i just made a ufo flying n crashed a person which is my bro =P

OK

hard to read. need to improve text/background

I won't bother doing a full review cos you've already said you wont improve it.

Course

What course was this for in university, it's great for a first flash, but did you get marked down for grammar?

Well

Your first flash movie? Pretty good. Graphics were a bit bad, but hey, you only get better!