Nice idea
I think you should complete it, it's a pretty good idea.
Author Comments
Mediaeval Night, is the first of it's kind. Interactive FP Flash games are nothing new, but this one is different. You are invited to help me create the game. Your feedback for the story line and all the content that make it happen is requested. Please feel free to comment the game, send me graphics, flash movies etc. If they are suitable, I will incorporate them into the game and post them here and at the MN website.
http://redefinewebdesign.
com/mediaevalnight.html
Currently in the works:
In-Game feedback
A Game HUD
Game Characters
The next two scenes of level one.
Doug
Redefine Web Design
Douglas D. Keely
1623 Sheffield Drive
Norman, OK 73071
SoonerCruiser responds:
Thanks for the kudos!
I work full-time as a teacher and school is still in session. I plan to spend some serious time on the project this summer. Please check back often for new work. And don't be shy about giving me your feedback.
Looks cool, would be better completed
the part with the church, cellar, and wierd stump, is the final part my computer lets me get to,
reminds me of the outdoors part of exmortis
SoonerCruiser responds:
That's all I've gotten produced so far. Stay tuned for "The Cellar", "The Moor", "The Stables", "The Forest". "The Caverns" and "The Castle". But watch out for "The Peasant Zombies" and "The Rabid Wolves"!
It would be great if it gets worked on a little.
This sounds like a good idea but what it really needs from a gamer's point of view is some kind of an intro to set the mood of the whole thing. In the intro could help to the setting, place, and the purpose could be revealed. It was over far too quickly and in that sense is less then what a gamer would want. Although if it gets worked on and is patched up it could work. Also if you had incorporated maybe the reviewer's own stories and put them into use as a plot twist or a point than this could open up to a whole community. Nice idea but it needs to be pushed into the right direction.
SoonerCruiser responds:
Thanks for you feedback!
I just added some scrolling text in "The Blue Forest" to help you get started with a story of sorts.
Your feedback is essential to this project. Keep it coming!
Not ready for Newgrounds yet, but...
Mr. Keely,
If you cut through the less helpful feedback to read this, I'd like to offer my two cents. Your idea is intriguing. Have you heard about Addventures? In a nutshell, they're choose-your-own-adventure stories (text-only), where anyone can read or write the episodes. Your idea is more ambitious, since most people can write but not everyone can work in flash. However, I encourage you to let people join by adding their own flash content directly.
The flash you have here is incomplete. You already knew that, but it is disappointing, given people's expectations for a flash game posted on Newgrounds. Perhaps you should work from Newground's forums instead of through flash submissions, until you have something to show us. The atmosphere you have so far is excellent, so I hope your project is successful.
P.S. You're not the first computer teacher to be inspired by Lewis Carroll. My CS professors quoted him often.
SoonerCruiser responds:
Thanks for your encouraging feedback. This is my hobby. Maybe there will be some profit at some point in the future, but that is definitely NOT my concern right now. This is too much fun!
I will check out Addventures.
Score means nothin, Heads up tho:
Alright, i just gave you a straight 5 for now just coz the game looks tight so far, but it went no where when ya get to the screen with the 3 places to click. just a heads up, coz i cant get it to work past there.
SoonerCruiser responds:
Thanks for the rating!
That's all there is so far.
Feedback, Feedback, Feedback.
Help me create this game.
I want your ideas.