Well, I didn't like it
I found the humor to be non-existent. "You should do a dance that's called The Funky Chicken OMG HILARIOUS!"...Or not so much. There was neither set-up, nor punchline to your humor. Just (semi) dancing clay.
Movement was minimal at best. Most of the animation was one character raising his arm or turning his head, serving only to designate that they were in fact the one speaking.
It was a completely dialogue driven piece, and the dialogue was forced and unentertaining.
I'm no stranger to NG, and I'm very familiar with Knox, and I don't think this would pass if it were anyone else's work.