Interesting

To me, the flash was a litle boring, but it was a decent one anyway. The concept was interesting, and the animation, although a bit slow, was relatively good. The graphics were pretty simple, but they worked for the falsh. Adding in the background noise helped out this flash a lot as well. To improve, I would've have made the transformation into the 4 pens a little smoother, as the shape tweening didn't look right to me. Also, I'm not sure of the significance of the paper's fold on the corner.

Nice work

This wasn't bad, the animation was a little stiff, but, the concept was interesting. I can see you becoming a decent flash artist in the future. Good luck.

I loled

Cute movie, I laught when the maginfying glass zoom in on the bunny giving the finger. graphics can be improved on and so can the music, however the animation was pretty decent.

needs a bit of work...

i've never seen a pen do that.

one thing you might wanna do in the intro is define a [hit] area for the play icon. it wont be seen in the final movie, but it will make it so you can click anywhere to play, not just on the lines.

keep on learning!!!