You left out the SPLAT!
I can't believe you left out the huge SPLAT when they hit the ground at the end! I feel robbed! It would have been perfect!
Author Comments
I've finally finished it!
Yes, yes, i know. the same two girls from my first submission...
Started this during spring break. Done for the sake of background painting practice, so, terribly sorry if the backgrounds are not as great as it could have been.
xenoface responds:
hahaha, yeah.
Well, i'm terribly sorry but i was lazy, and the song was already ending...
Nice animation
I'm impressed with how well you did the animation. The only problem is when the ppl leap and fall. Looks like the background is just moving. I like the plot of this story. A bit creepy. I wanted to know what happened after the leap but it ended. Oh well. I like it so 5ived.
Beutiful
I love this Everything about it was that your drawing in the background?
the shape tween could have been directed a bit better but the story was heart pounding
beautiful
beautiful, extraordinary(in the truest sense unfortunately as iv seen similar styles) but still........
impressive nonetheless i hope when i grow up to be as good as this at least
good work
cool
wow very origanal it has an interesting idea to it and i think you have got talent for story's...hope to see another one soon
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