Not much to go on.
There wasnt much to go on there really! I mean i know its a preview and not yet finished but there wasnt much action and it was all a bit slow!
Its a good idea tho and would be a good new concept for a toon on NG.
Maby adding a few scenes of the monkey being transformed in to an evil creature would look cool like putting him in a stasis tank floating in a green substance! Zoom to his closed eyes and have them open quickly.
But i think this could turn out to be a good series and an intresting one at that so keep up the good work!