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i want to know if you like my style of drawing
First off don't submit unfinished projects to NG.
Secoundly the drawings were quite choppy, looks abit traced aswell.
I kinda liked the light technique at the tower though.
But as I said, not worthy for NG.. yet.
But the finished project hopefully will.
This has OK graphics, but handrawings doesn't always get good geometrical forms. Using lines and elypses will get a 10 for this.
keep it up
your drawing is superb and now the movie - it's too short, put some story, like the music, on the other hand you can convert it to a game, that would be awesome. and that damn tower is too long, lol
Quicken it up
You need to speed things up a lot. Your whoel intro took WAY too long, man.
Also, you show the guy in the field and it takes too long to move up. Move it up sooner and a bit faster.
Keep the Flash moving or it dies, know what I mean?
Good luck and I like the drawings.
If you really want to base it off of Akira Toriyama's work, they are called 'tsufri', not tuffles (it was supposed to be a subtle joke about Fruits vs Vegetables). and By god if you make a 'tuffle' look like one of those bastards from 'GT' (which akira toriyama did NOTHING on), which one the worst thing that ever happened to DBZ, I will Masenko your face right off DAMMIT!!!
PS- feel free to ask me anything about DBZ, I am kind of a buff. ; )
Four dwarven leaders in search for ancient treasure.
A Mystery Noir Series... Episode 6: Detective Swift confronts The Big Bad Wolf
Goofy dies. Sora cries.
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