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First off don't submit unfinished projects to NG.

Secoundly the drawings were quite choppy, looks abit traced aswell.
I kinda liked the light technique at the tower though.

But as I said, not worthy for NG.. yet.

But the finished project hopefully will.

It's OK

This has OK graphics, but handrawings doesn't always get good geometrical forms. Using lines and elypses will get a 10 for this.

keep it up

your drawing is superb and now the movie - it's too short, put some story, like the music, on the other hand you can convert it to a game, that would be awesome. and that damn tower is too long, lol

Quicken it up

You need to speed things up a lot. Your whoel intro took WAY too long, man.

Also, you show the guy in the field and it takes too long to move up. Move it up sooner and a bit faster.

Keep the Flash moving or it dies, know what I mean?

Good luck and I like the drawings.

ahem

If you really want to base it off of Akira Toriyama's work, they are called 'tsufri', not tuffles (it was supposed to be a subtle joke about Fruits vs Vegetables). and By god if you make a 'tuffle' look like one of those bastards from 'GT' (which akira toriyama did NOTHING on), which one the worst thing that ever happened to DBZ, I will Masenko your face right off DAMMIT!!!

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Pe@ce

PS- feel free to ask me anything about DBZ, I am kind of a buff. ; )