Sounds bad... looks alright
You've got the beginnings of a great flash here. Firstly, I couldn't stand the audio. Not because it was a foreign song, but it took me half of the song to work out that it was foreign.
The animation is decent, although it does look ill-conceived and drawn with MS Paint. If you did draw this in flash, you really need to invest in a tablet, zoom in closer and take more time to draw, so you can give us a more detailed picture.
This does have a plot, which is nice, one of the redeeming points of your work. You've come through Star Day and have a decent scoring flash to show for it. Good work.
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