Sounds bad... looks alright

You've got the beginnings of a great flash here. Firstly, I couldn't stand the audio. Not because it was a foreign song, but it took me half of the song to work out that it was foreign.

The animation is decent, although it does look ill-conceived and drawn with MS Paint. If you did draw this in flash, you really need to invest in a tablet, zoom in closer and take more time to draw, so you can give us a more detailed picture.

This does have a plot, which is nice, one of the redeeming points of your work. You've come through Star Day and have a decent scoring flash to show for it. Good work.

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^^Good Points^^
Definitely a cool movie you have here, one of the better ones I've seen from Star Day. The animation style was cool, very smooth, and the drawings were equally good. Parts of this were pretty cute, like the flower and the bee falling in love. I enjoyed watching this.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, I had a hard time understanding what the heck was going on. I got the part that they fall in love, but what's with the thing that scans their tongues or whatever? Anyway, not bad.

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*Drops a tear* What a masterpiece !

Wow, what an outstanding animation Brandon.
You've got so much talent, and it's only the beginning !
Keep up your good work dude !

Well done man!

Lol, that rocks. Your getting really good at your style now man, very nice, I liked that alot. :D

this is pretty cool!!!

this is pretty cool i hope to see more of this