Tch, tch
Dude! Get better backgrounds! Theres a website that has a lot of good backgrounds that are from the game's sprite! Also, the same music is boring! Get more music! From what I ave seen its all right. And PLZ! Watch your spelling!
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UPDATE -- I'm gonna make another sprite movie, no Mario sprites though, all of the sprites made by me.
This is the first flash I've put on the site. It's my first sprite movie and pretty much, my first flash. So please, bear that in mind when you're rating it! Mario's just being a bit of a moron in this. And, he flys a plane... and he flys a submarine.
mr-alien1 responds:
Yeah I know. Bear in mind this was my first proper sprite movie.
Also, I misspelled on purpose.
not bad
The animation was good but you need to give some indication of whats going on. some sound effects would be nice or at least not the endless theme tune in the background. It might be a good idea to make the pause and play buttons invisible until you move your mouse over it. Overall it was pretty good but it just need tweaking.
Oh and your not fooling anyone, I know you know bo-ching
mr-alien1 responds:
Yeah. I know. But. if you read my update, i'm making another sprite movie. But ALL the sprites will be drawn by me. It will be better than this.
pretty good
Mr Alien. well, since it is your first flash and you learnt all your stuff without any help, it's pretty good. as you know you did spell earlier wrong apart from that it was firly good, acouple of sound affects would be good, but it was good!
Keep it up!
mr-alien1 responds:
Who ever you are (wink wink), i shan't be doing any sprite movies for a while. but thanks 'n stuff... I purposely spelled earlier wrong. I agree with the sound effects bit though...
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ok this is no good the hole thing look like it was done in 6 sec. but if you make an new flash it has to: look good (graphics) be someing new (style) sounds good (will sound/songs talking ect) violence (do it if you like) interarctivity and funny and your overall will go up
Was it to be expected?
The score is low. This is due to the following:
This was basically mario moving from side to side against a different background. A single background. The Sky to beging with was rather lazily done, as was the lightning. All the other Backgrounds were rather simple.
I thought that you would go on to make a decent flash, as the only sprite was mario and transport, but this turned out to be boring. Sorry to have to say it, have a bit more content. Its your first time, but that does not stop you from making it interesting.
Sound effects would have been good, just a continuous loop of music for such a long time gets tedious.
Don't let this get you down, just try to make it more interesting next time. I wish you good luck, though by the looks of this, you won't need it - the potential is there.
mr-alien1 responds:
I have learnt from my mistakes and probably will not do any sprite movies for a few months. But when I do try once more I will try to make it more interesting. I am thinking of starting a factual series about science and things. I hope you (and others) will like it.
