one problem

ad a sound track that lasts for the majority of the flash man

Really good

I really liked this and I loved the gritty atmosphere. The only area you lose points in is audio. I'd love voices and a kickin soundtrack but I'm sure the continuation will have all that. Good storyline and sweet animation. Keep up the good work for ye have talent.

Loved it but...

This was awsome but can you look through the audio portal and try and find some music to put to the intro at the beginning. I think it will really help.

Good job!

Very nice for a first flash. Here's your scoring:

Begin w/ 10/10
-1 for choppy animation at parts
-1 for no sound
-1 for action a bit slow at times
+1 for humour

Which puts you at an 8/10.

Keep up the good work!

it was cool

it was good for a new flash it looks like it could be a series it just needs a villen to top the boss you no like at the end of one he takes a goverment building any way that's my take on this o and the last dudes right fix the copter it looks funny you no just not right and sound would be nice but i like the type with only sfx sound it makes it seam more real but whats with the blood in the elavater it dident look right i meen he moves his foot and suddenly
theres blood there needs to be some reson at lest when he gets to the top well other then that it was very cool