omfg!
omfg, this was so good, laught my ass off, It was short and über-random, I like this shit!
Author Comments
Some emo kids at my school like to complain. I don't like them to complain, so I decided to kill one of them with some huge scissors. :D.
SOUND!!!
nice one.
emo people, stop complaining!
i think i would do the same thing to them.
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lol The-Pimply-Pornstar talkin about begaining and end what begainning? what end.. I blinked and missed it! its hella short,
overall 1 but im being generous
ok, alot of criticism for this movie... the eyes were too beady, the wer too black for the character, the colours that you chose were off, (grey?? come ONNN).. anyways the storyline confused me, the beginnign needs improvement, the ending needs more of a punch, the character develepment needs some imroving. overall a poor performance here, but there is always room from improvment right. im not saying stop making flash videos, im saying take my advice, make someadjustments and then youll be on your way to success.
DaBudda responds:
For the colors, he was black and grey becuase he's an emo. There wasn't really a storyline. But thanks for the review!
Needs a Little more...
The addition of sound to this improved it a lot, but if more plot was added before the end it would make the joke a hell of a lot more funny. Seriously, all that needs to be done is about 20 more seconds adding on to how pathetic that person is just to build up to the killing and it will be pretty good. Besides that, good luck!
DaBudda responds:
Hm...what exactly do you mean?
Right now I'm working on an animation with a complete storyline, and it's gonne kick ass. Wish me luck!