it was pretty good :P

it was ook, kinda confusing, needs more colour, needs to be longer and needs sounds, effects and music ^^ i hope you recover the original flash file :D

~ DEFF

actually

it was pretty good i agree you could improve on it adding sound would make it alot better keep up the work im sure the next will be better

Not bad...

Definitely something you can improve on. You obviously have skill with drawing. Now just make a plot and sound.

almost xD

sound, background, length, and maybe even color....all missing. if you but those in im sure this would be great.

Sometimes simplicity is good

Well animated and quite smooth, although it could have used some sound.