Well...

A lot of people are saying this has awful animation, but still... It has its good points. Of course, it wasn't awesome, nor would I say it was good, but it was okay especially since it was your first. I can't really give you any advice to improve your drawing, as I can't draw myself... -_-, but anyways, to improve those parts where he's walking learn how to "motion tween." You probably shouldn't overuse it, but still, it's good for many things. I can't really say anything's wrong with it, it wasn't too humorous but had a little bit and that little bit wasn't bad. However, if it won in a contest those other people must have been pretty bad... >_>
Guess I have nothing to worry about in the Computer Fair 2007, XD
2/5

I dont belive that won first prize...

The graphics were crappy drawn, try using the line tool instead. The style wasn't completley horrible, but it wasn't good etheir.
No violence.
No interactivity.
Not funny at all...
Overall 4.

PS: Your work does have SOME potential, just practice and i'm sure you'll get good.

I've got one question for you...

What kind of a contest would give this first prize? This was terribly drawn and poorly animated and just overall a complete wast of my time. The music was pretty neat though.

Very good!

I think this was a very good flash, especially since it was your first, the graphics were amazing and it was an amusing storyline too. I think you should continue to make flashes:- you could make a series?? I liked the music too, im playing the entertainer in a brass band lol. Anyway keep up the good work! =)

Oddsniffer =)

Not bad

I'm not sure what it was, but there was something about it that made me like it when I don't normally like flash like this.
The graphics were nothing special, yet they were kinda cute etc
Wasn't too keen on the music, it did get a little irritating after a while.
Apart from that it was alright, keep it up.