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Graphical Text Adventure

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Ok, now in your reviews don't be a dick. I want you to tell me what you think should be in further games, what shouldn't have been a part of this one, basically what should be in the next one. This was just a test so I didn't work to hard on it. The music is by Khuskan, the artist on NG

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Great start

If you had made it longer it probably could've been considered a finished product. Improve the graphics, make an inventory, give it a story, and make it slightly less linear. Hope I wasn't a dick.


kitty-and-meander responds:

Nope, you weren't a dick at all bro. Hmm... yeah graphics, no problem, I'm a fairly good artist, this was just a test. Linear, not exactly sure what you mean. And every review has requested inventory so you shall get it sir. :). Would you do me a favor and look oput for my furthur projects? Thanks for the review! You don't know how much it's appreciated!


A bit longer....

Its nice to see an adventure game of this sort and the music was great.
ok, for serious stuff
-Make longer
-lots of stuff to read. could you make a memo pad that writes what you read?
-make more stuff actionable, like opening drawers
-sometimes the movement buttons are confusing
-the graphics are a bit poor, but i guess this is just a test game so its ok
-bring items into it


kitty-and-meander responds:

Well... Movement buttons have always been confusing in text adventures... So theres not much I can really do about that, Opening drawers, I'll put that in just for you. And a memo pad, that is a great idea, I'll definatley use that one. Thanks for the review!


Interesting

Interesting, but it could use some work, I'm giving it a one due to a lack of open endedness i wasn't sure what to do and in the end i found Jesus... try adding a few more endings


kitty-and-meander responds:

Good point lone review. Good point indeed. I shall do that in my next graphical text adventure. Thanks for the review!

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Apr 16, 2007
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