*Don't blam just cuz it's short, watch it before voting!*
This is what happens when you've had a few beers and try to produce a good walking cycle.. Hilarity. Well, to me anyway.
Song: 21st Century Beatnik - 'One T
okay
well... your efforts were nice, but this one did need some more work on it. it was a bit short... maybe could've been longer, but this one did need the following: better audio... i dont think that that song suited this one at all; and some more detail on the plot. your efforts were nice and it wasn't bad, but i think that those could've helped this one out.
Thank you come again!
Yes I watched the whole thing, all twenty seconds. Plot was poor. A complete lack of color. At least you had a pre loader, the last guy didn't. For something so short I just believe that you would have put more effort into the art. Your art style resembled that of a three year old. I had to watch it just three times to understand what the tree looked like.... was it a tree?? Anyway, it is obvious that you have the technical expertise to do well with flash, I hope that with time and effort you can have the art down. Good luck!
There's 5 trees in the movie, and one gigantic woman. I think you ment the woman :P
And the lack of color was on purpose, I wanted to give at an atmosphere that fitted with the song and the anti-climax joke. The same is true for the lousy graphics, they attribute to the joke.
You just need my kind of humor for this one ;)
funny i guess
you get points for effort i guess
but it's still just a not really graphically-amazing flash thats 20 seconds long and its all for one joke, that was only kind of a little funny
didn't really impress me. maybe next time.
Actually, I was just practicing a walking cycle and suddenly came up with such a lousy pun to "Fatal Attraction" (i.e. "Fatal Distraction") that I just had to make an animation about it. Didn't really feel like putting much into it, though =(
Lol
Good moral to the story, smooth animation, pretty funny at the end, overall, good job! try to make it longer, make more scenes depicting why you shouldnt get distracted, thatd be better =)
3/5
Hmmmm, that might be an idea for a version II.
Though, this got a really low score.. Must be the graphics and shortness of it, I suppose.
Anyway, so I doubt there will actually be a version II, but who knows?
check your spelling
You spelled "moral" incorrectly. Next time, if you're going to put that much effort into something, make sure that most of it is spelled right. It's an easy way to avoid bad votes and reviews.
Darn it, you're right! *hits himself in the head*
I've fixed it now. Thanks for warning me.