I really liked the style you did this in. But it really could you a little more detail for example I couldn't really tell if he got bitten by the fish?
You have an interesting style. Unfortunately I got bored after the first 5 seconds. Your sound and voice overs are also another thing you got going for you, but a mix up of different voices (possibly different voice actors) would help you out quite a bit. Your animation has a lot of movement which is good to see, but, it wouldn't hurt to see your characters arms move a bit. Some of your plot lines need a bit of work also.
Other than that, good job, and keep it up.
I can't say this one was as good as the other one.
Well i am very let down. I thought this one was going to be as good as the other. I'm not saying this animation was bad, but it didn't seem to be as good as the other one.
Anyway, somethings to improve on are the blood, not just 2 drops repetitively coming out of his arm. maybe add some more scenes and make the animation a whole lot longer.
So i hope that your next flash is a lot better and will be much longer, keep it up:)
that was actually pretty cool =) work on your drawing skills abit then redo these :) they would be amzing if the drawin was better =)
its not bad and its not good Either