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28/08/07 Update *NEW MUSIC* - Thanks everyone who voted, I didnt expect it do get such a high score =), I know alot of people didnt like the music so ive redone the song and I have changed the resolution and changed a few other things so it runs better at high quality, but if it lags please change it to low. Andrew

This is my newest short film called "IF". It didnt start out as a short film but it progressed to this in the end. I had lots of fun making it and I hope you enjoy it.

*update* Thanks to all who voted I appreciate it, glad alot of you enjoyed it.


Pretty good

Pretty good, but the story could have been a litel better.


Your animation was good, so you get a 2. Other than that = fail

If I...

Give a Ten, you could add Voice overs to the story, this could give a better climax, the ending was perfect, also try to add some scenes, flash backs I mean, this will give the viewer more understanding of the clip. Anyway I give you a 10/10, cause you matched perfectly the title with the story, great music, good animation

Not Original

I enjoyed this movie and found it interesting but predictable. From the very beginning I knew that the man would die, that woman would be sad, and that that would be the end. I loved the animation, soundtrack, and emotion put behind this but it has been done many times before. Overall, the movie was enjoyable but all together too predictable.


Well I think the man-criminal is sad cause he realises he will gonna be catched and there is no way out.
The woman is crying cause she saw a man dying, which was a shock to her.
And the movie is called "if" cause...
That's hard, let me see...
...cause he may hide in the phone box, IF the woman weren't there, and survive.
...or it means just that IF he didn't done "bad things" everything could be diffrent.

Why 8? Well the animation was not bad, the story a little weird.

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4.36 / 5.00

Apr 13, 2007
11:19 AM EDT
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